I
wrote this poem many years ago for a magazine called New Love Stories, now
defunct. They didn't buy it. That’s okay. It’s romantic in a different kind of
way than they wanted, I guess. But we woke up this morning to dreary skies and
rain which brought this poem to mind. Perhaps you’ll find some echo in your own
heart as autumn creeps in on little cat feet.
Autumn
at the Gate
By
Susan Sundwall
She
came upon the garden late,
and
lingered there beside the gate,
as
fallen leaves went whirling round
with
rustling crunch upon the ground.
The
rising moon, the hissing breeze
had
found the bare bones of the trees
and
pressed upon her heart, at last,
that
winter now would come on fast.
Mid
wistful thoughts of summer days,
the
lovely, golden autumn haze
seemed
as a lover’s kiss, and then
she
left the gate for home again.
Photo: Last year's garden in October with our red barn in the distance. Thanks for reading.
Beautiful word pictures. I can feel the autumn air. It seems to match what I felt when I went outside a few minutes ago.
ReplyDeletePS: There should be plenty of markets for it.
Marion
So glad you enjoyed, Marion. And thanks for the PS. =0)
DeleteLovely poem. Lovely scenery, Sue.
ReplyDeleteAw, Thanks, Jen. Have a super day.
DeleteHi, Susan:
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this poem. I like how I could instantly visualize the scene by line two because of the imagery you painted.
Have you tried pitching this to another magazine? You should.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
It's been a while since I wrote this. Don't know who else would want it. Rhyming poems are not very popular anymore. Glad you enjoyed it, though! Thanks back.
DeleteLovely... just lovely. And so was the photo. You seem to have a special place for all the seasons.
ReplyDeleteI do, Cindy. Makes my world predictable, I guess.
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