This is a poem I wrote many years ago. I invented a couple of
words for it so a purist might scoff. But it was how I felt at the time. And
some of the leaves we pick up from the ground around here really do look like
they're "leathered" and bare limbs seem "starkened."
I hope it brings a fall day to mind for you and that October has a
special place in your heart as it does mine.
Moon
Dance
By
Susan Sundwall
October
drapes her burnished skirt,
stirred
by an errant breeze;
bends
down to earth and offers thus
her
crimson leathered leaves.
Too
soon the crisping winter air
will
bare the ancient bones
of
starkened limbs that once were dressed
in
vibrant greening tones.
And
yet once more beneath the moon
all
held within her trance,
my
aching soul is touched for ‘tis
October’s
dying dance.
Photo: a tree near our barn
Sue,
ReplyDeleteI love this poem almost as much as I love October. Good job; great use of personification and imagery.
Thank you, Jen. You fellow poet, you. have a great day!
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